Like the composition. Would tone down the contrast between the second vampire man's stomach and surrounding clothes, and maybe most of the highlights in the background figures except the last one standing. I think if you did that, the front figure would pop out more. But I like the diagonal direction and general line quality. I think palette is unusual for a reason I can't think of right now. The other thing is maybe vary the expression of the figure right next to the foreground figure, they are somewhat similar. Looks like a lot of fun. Keep up the good work.
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